Write a composition, describing:
Nightmare journey you've had or invent one.(100-150 words)
Guided questions:
When was the journey? Where were you going? Who with? Why? (Paragraph 1)
What went wrong? What happened? (Paragraph 2)
What happened in the end? (Paragraph 3)
The composition will be graded in the following way: 2pts grammar, 2pts spelling, 2pts organization, 2pts content, 2pts usage of vocabulary (pps.33 and 148).
Deadline October 11th
104 comentarios:
Garcia Coronado America Montserrat Group: 408-B
It was June of 2010, my family and I were in Cancun, we have going there because we where invited to a wedding of a cousin of my dad. We travel with the brother of my dad, my uncle ie. All the journey was well but the NIGHTMARE JOURNEY starts when they last day in Cancun our fly to return was at 3:00 AM but at the past day he return of the beach very late. When we wake up it was 2:30 AM an the airport was not close to the hotel when we where. We have to go very fast to the airport and I forget some tings in the hotal (but my uncle keep it and he give me them after, when we arrive to the airport after record bags and verify tickest we were ready and we go to the gate of the air plane the handle don't let us pass but after ten minutes that we please for pass, she acceded and fortunately we return at time to Mexico.
Cisneros Cuevas Diego Jesus: 402-B
A weekend of September 2010 I traveled to Guadalajara with my family as it was the fifteenth year of a cousin.
Everything was fine until the car we were traveling began to fail at night, it was raining, we were trying to fix it, but not yet, then we stayed in a hotel that night. My father went to fix it in the morning, but kept failing on the road, we were very hungry and sleepy.
After several hours of continuous on the road, the car did not move, I called a tow truck and waited for them to come to us. We arrived in town until dawn.
Saavedra Serrano Brian Alessandro 408B
This journey nightmare happened two weeks ago. Like all the Friday´s afternoon I had taken the bus to Tlaxcala in the East Central Bus of Mexico City, and like all the days, I traveled alone one more time.
When the bus was in Panotla started to stop, one of the drivers told to us that we could wait like two or three hours there, because a carcrash had happened few meters ahead.
We were waiting two long hours in the bus while the cranes were removing three crashed cars, but finally the bus started again the travel with no interruptions.
Becerra Burguete Josè de Jesùs: 402-B
A few years ago, my family and me were celebrating my grandma's birthday in her house in Nayarit, we enjoy that night, but we should arrive to Mexico City soon.
While we were on the road, a van crashed with us, the driver got out of the van and paid us for his fault, but we had to wait for a crane for 2 hours, because we wanted to fix the car, we had to stay in an hotel for 3 days and finally we continued driving house. I should prefer going by plane to avoid accidents like this.
Guillermo Toledo Barrón
Grupo: 408
Well, first of all you have to know something about me, that i am from Michoacan and i'm just here for school, so my family and friends are there. Because of that, i try to go there every weekend, but on “friday 13” was the worst journey that i had taken. At first when arrive to the subway station, it was the rush time so it was too difficult to get into the tube and when i finally get in my station i couldn't get out of the metro because of the avast amount of people that was there. Then, when arrive to the observatorio bus station, they told me that the next bus to Michoacan will live in two hours. After all that martyrdom i was inside the bus, but when i thought it was over the bus became stuck, and a journey that it was supposed to take only two hours turns into a journey that took me more than 8 hours.
It was a hot summer afternoon and my family and I were returning home from a weekend vacations in Guanajuato a year ago or so. We went there because of the annual exposition of hot air balloons.
We were all really happy because our vacations had been a pleasant experience and we wanted to arrive home to tell everybody about our trip.
The trip started well, but as we went down the road, all the cars began to stop. We were wondering what could have happened to produce such traffic, when we heard a police saying that a trailer had overturned some kilometers ahead. We stayed there for almost 4 hours and barely moving, so my dad said it would wiser to choose another road.
We said as my father proposed, but it wasn’t the best choice, because we were forced to take a federal secondary road. At that time, the sky was getting darker, and we drove for 3 hours in a poor illuminated, dual carriageway, abandoned and neglected free way. Finally we reached our destination, a bit frightened, but relieved it was all over.
Ana Sayuri González Kise 511
Vélez Rivera Adrián Felipe
402 B
A nightmare journey I remember was four years ago, my family and me were coming back to Mexico City, after we had been in Veracruz, because my brother and me were on holiday.
Came back in the afternoon on Sunday, because my father will work the next morning. But in the middle of the journey, the car broke down, so, we had to stop. After two hours, the car began to move, but in the entrance of the city there was a huge traffic jam, and the traffic wasn't moving at all. It passed between two or three hours, after that, the cars were begining to move.
Finally, we arrived to Mexico City in the early morning, it was three o'clock! So, we went to sleep and my father was very tired.
Navarrete Cruz Erick Sebastián 402-B
My family and I went to my grandpa´s hometown, Santa Catarina, Oaxaca on 2008 because some relatives had invited us to spend our vacation.
We traveled by car and arrived at Oaxaca, but we had to travel by donkey through a little mountain so we can reach the little town. There was a lot of rocks and it was very hot. Suddenly, my grandpa fell off the donkey and luckily he didn't get injured. After that, we reached the town and I realized that there wasn't electric energy or light and water service either. We had to do a lot of things to survive. It was a kind of nightmare even for the people that lives there. I liked it a little because is a new experience for me.
Olvera Baeza karla Pamela 408B
It was June of 2003, my mom and me traveled to Guatemala to visit my father.
When we arrived in Guatemala, the people saw us very bad, looked contemptuously and said things about us, the floor was only land and there was nothing. At the last day, in the hotel told us that don’t go out in the night because would have a march. In the night, we stay in the room and started listen shouts and blows; I saw out of the window and looked a big ball of people with torches, sticks, tires and stones, the people shout would take the government buildings.
I remember that I can’t sleep but after a time I can. In the morning there was nothing.
Barredo Escalona Paola Betsabe 402-B
It was july of 2010, three years ago, when my family and me were on our way to Acapulco because we wanted to spend there our summer vacations.
Everything was going right, but then suddenly in the middle of the night, and in the middle of the road, the car stop working. Me and my sister were really scared and we just wanted to get out of there, but there was no help or any car over there, so we were alone in the middle of the night and we didn't know what to do, because we didn't have any cellphones.
But in the end a man in a motorway passed throw the road, he let us use his cellphone and we finally could get some help to get out of there.
Portillo León Brenda Athziry 408 B
The journey was when I was 8 years old, I traveled with my family to Cancun and the reason was because we were going to celebrate my birthday there.
We left here at 10 o'clock, I organized my luggage the day before in two suitcases,my mom had our boarding pass...we went to the airport, the airplane took off... when we landed, we went to the baggage reclaim, we went to the hotel and then to the beach. But when we got to the beach, I wanted to go to sea, my dad went with me because I could not swim, my feet no longer touched the ground (sand) but I was wearing floats, and I remember I felt the fishes hitting my feet and at that moment I felt something pinched me, I screamed, and so I jumped into the arms of my dad, he quickly took me to the edge and I realized I had a crab on my foot ... it was horrible because I scared.
In the end my parents saw that I wasn´t wounded because it was a tiny crab.
SUSANA GONZÁLEZ SOLÍS 402B
I left my house October 1 I do not remember very well the day, I just remember it was a travel nightmare because I was late to meet a friend for having fallen asleep late fix me and went out later than expected I ran to take the pesero and had a huge row so I had to wait a long time, when I could finally get the pesero going so slowly and almost bumped me down when I end up not missing much of the way and ran as if I kept on pesero not would come and end up falling, with my friend arrives late, sore and she was upset with me
Name: Campos Iturbe Katya. Group: 408 B
My nightmare journey.
It happened three years ago, on vacation in April. I traveled with my mother to Michoacan to visit my grandfather.
The bad thing happened was that I forgot to close my eyes in a forest where the road has many curves, because as this area is very dangerous I was more concerned that an accident could happen with the bus that dizzy, and did happen. I threw up a few times, even hours after reaching their intended destination.
In the end I spent the day with dizziness and my mom (afraid that I got sick stomach) injected me twice, but we arrived safely at my grandfather's house.
Dominguez Pahí Ingrid Shyamala 402-B
It was April 21, we were on the Holy Week, so we decided to go to Guanajuato, to visit some of our relatives. I was with my parents, and my little sister.
So, we were on the road, but there was a part of it that was wrong,so we lost the control of the car, and it rolled. Our car was destroyed. Then, an ambulance came for us,and took my mom, who was the most injured. She lost a part of her right hand. All the day we were traveling from hospital to hospital. But it was a miracle, because we didn't ended hurt at all.
Nieto Bernal Tsanda Yaveli Group 408B
It happened too many years ago, I was like two years and I wear on a trip to visit the pyramids on Tlaxcala. I was with my mother and father and also with all my aunts and my grandfather and grandmother.
The things begin to turn wrong when my grandfather started insulting my dad, I really don't know why. But well I think that that family is a little moody so all my aunts started to say wrong things about my dad and mom. So they leave us in the middle of the highway.
We were so afraid and worried but we coud found a little town where we took a bus and it returned us to the Mexico City.
García Fernández Jesús Alejandro
508A
My worst trip was 2 years ago, my family and i, had to go to the state of Puebla to a wedding that would had start at 12 P. M.
All went well, we were on the road puebla, and my mom's car stopped in the middle of the road, then my dad and I we had to push it off the car for many kilometers
We arrived to a mechanic and it took years to compose the car, There was no shop to buy something to eat, We were hungry so we started to be in a bad
They finally managed to compose the car y And we continue our way, We arrived at the wedding at 9 in the evening and with very poor appearance.
That day has been
my my worst trip!
Ruiz García Paola Grupo: 402-B
It was march, five years ago, I traveled with my family to Poza Rica and Tecolutla, first we want to visit some of our relatives and then we stay in Tecolutla for vacations.
We travaled all the night because in the motorway there was a huge of traffic jam and then the gasoline was empty. My grandpa and my uncle walked to the nearby gas station meanwhile the rest of us waiting in the dark highway and they back tree hours later with tree bottles of gasoline.
Finally we arrived so tired but all the weekend we rest with a coconut at the beach.
Ortiz Segura Luis Javier 513B
It was in my last vacations like in May of this year. I returned to Mexico for San Juan Del Rio, Queretaro because my parents have a house there and we wanted a few vacations days. I was with my family in the car and my father was the driver.
The road was very dark and my father doesn’t have a very good view. On the journey happened to me two things. A truck that was in front of us started to wobble and we thought that the truck was going to overturn but the driver of the truck took the control of the vehicle. The second was that I believed to see a person in the middle of the highway and I shouted so loud and my father brake.
Finally we had to stoped to calm the fright and returned to Mexico with the memory of the events that happened in the journey.
Quintana Ramírez Mildred Nalleli 402-B
This nightmare journey happened a few years ago, when my family and I were returning from my grandparent's house.
All was happening as usual, when suddenly my dad shout us: Lean!
My sisters an I react quickly when we saw that the police were armed.
A minutes later, my father told us that we could stand up yet. Then he said that apparently, in the car that was in front of us, were some thieves and the police were watinig for they. So it was possible, that in any moment, the things returned worst and the shooting began.
But affortunately, nothing wrong happened and we returned safe and sound to our home.
Aco Guerrero Ivan Rogelio 508A
I was 13 years old when i lived a Nightmare Journey. I traveled with my brother, mother, father and grandmother. We needed vacations because work hard. My family and i went to Mexico airport because we were going to go to Chiapas.
At the airport our trip was at 12:00 pm and we arrived to 11:00 and when we were going to deliver the tickets my mother realized that she didn't have her ticket and she was search her ticket for a long time.
Finally My father and i went with an assistant to explain our situation. Fortunalety she printed other ticket for my mom and she has very happy. We enjoy our vacations in Chiapas.
Barron Lopez Sebastian 508 A
It was six years ago, me and my family were going to a town in Nayarit for the hollydays
We were traveling by car, we were so happy when one of the wheels broke, so we had to stop and change the wheel, we finished and restarted the journey and one hour later in the same place where the first wheel broke the second wheel broke but we didn't have anothet wheel but luckly we were passing by a small town so we could buy another wheel and we changed again.
At the end of the day the third wheel didn't break so we could finish the journey safe and sound.
Ochoa Jiménez Zyanya Paulina
My trip was on August 2012. I was retuning to Mexico City from Veracruz,. I was traveling with my parents. We went there because we had vacations. I didn't want to return, so I started to cry a lot. Because of that, I got a headache all the way. I had that horrible headache for ten hours. the worst part was that the car that we were traveling in had a failure, and it was starting to rain. We had to wait that the rain finished, it was like three hours later. We were trying so hard to fix the car, but it doesn't want to work, After two hours of being working, the car finally worked, but there was a lot of traffic. We last five hours more to get home.
ARCIGA MELENDEZ JOSE DANIEL 508A
It was July of 2008 my family and I went to the beach in Cancun, we were really excited when without any reason the car started to heat up, but was heated so strongly that started to smoke the chest, a few hours later came the "green angels" to repair the car but not served at all and we waited more than six hours until I get a tow truck to take the car to the nearest town, a ghost town hahahaha where Habai fog and it was pretty scary, we were there at night not knowing While we were in that place, the next day we took the car to a mechanic and could reach cancun porfin .... one day after
ROJAS TREJO JOSÉ EDUARDO
402-B
on my vacation trip to Veracruz Mexico in the company of my father, my mother , my brothers and my grandparents and my cousins too .
we were there because we wanted divertinos together as a family but the trip was a nightmare.
we were very happy and quiet on the highway that leads directly Veracruz. unfortunately did not know the road well and it was the first time we went out there , so we came to a toll booth and asked how many kilometers left for Veracruz, and told us we were to the middle between Puebla and Veracruz , when suddenly the truck one began to get a lot of smoke and worry . my dad and my grandpa they checked and saw that the gearbox oil pulling so we decided to go back to london as it was a road that not a oxxo had and the first ascent was left standing without moving so we had to push my brother my cousin and I started to push until I start and we went up , but my dad would kilómetors 140 per hour, we were all very terrified by the speed to get to a place of cranes left in the tow truck and we had to leave in a truck.
thank God we arrived safely but get cost us sweat and despair
López Cuéllar Mariana 511
It was a Friday of Augost of this year.It was around the ten o'clock in the evening.My mom and I were on the bus,toward to our home.
The route pass through the highway, the bus stop was near,and we were prepare to lower, but the bus was full, and many people down there, then,the bus closed the doors and we couldn't down. We had to get down in the next bus stop, in the middle of the road. It was dark, cold and we were a little afraid. We walked a while, and later we arrived near of our house. We were finally in our home, after a bad moment.
thalia torres nava 408-B
the nightmare journey was July 10, my family and me went to Ixtapan de la Sal, in my dad’s car, my dad ordered us we put the seat belt, step a petrol station and many traffic lights. we went to visit my cousins and stay in vacation to summer,
when we were on the motorway was raining very hard, then when we arrived there was much mud in the courtyard, but we enter the House. We slept and the next day my sister gaby came out and was walking into the mud and started to sink, my mom and dad could not take in the mud to my sister and when are they trying to pull she sank lower. We were all very worried. In the end she was removed the boots and she could exit the mud
Martìnez Pichardo Ivàn Daniel: 402-B
It was june 2009, my family and I were in Taxco, Guerrero, and we went because we wanted to know that beautiful place in Mexico. We travelled with my mother, my father, my sister and me.
Everything began when we went to know the central square of Taxco, in the return, we were in a steep street and our car broke down and it began to smoke. In that day it was raining, and we had to get out of the car and check what was wrong. Then we had to push the car to the hotel, because the motor was damaged. We got to the hotel at 1:00 am, and we were so exhausted and had to take a shower because we rocked up in smoke.
The next day, my dad called a mechanic, in order to repair the car, when we were touring the place, he was repairing the car.
Finally, everything were fine, and we got to the Mexico City without any problem.
Hernandez Acosta Luis Hilario: 402 B
I remember that journey. It was in the month of July, my fanily and I wento on holidays to Huatulco, Oaxaca. Everything was going ok, but the day in that we have to return to the DF was when the nightmare starts.
We arrive at airport, the day was rainy, our flight was at twelve of clock, so we arrive on time.
When was time to go, a voice in a micrpohone said that our flight was belated. So we only have one option, to wait.
And then started to pass one, two, three, four, till we gat up to twelve hours, we wait twelve hours in the airport.
Whit out eating because the food was so expensive.
Finaly our flight arrive, and we land on the DF at 1:30 am of the next day.
Hernandez Acosta Luis Hilario: 402 B
I remember that journey. It was in the month of July, my fanily and I wento on holidays to Huatulco, Oaxaca. Everything was going ok, but the day in that we have to return to the DF was when the nightmare starts.
We arrive at airport, the day was rainy, our flight was at twelve of clock, so we arrive on time.
When was time to go, a voice in a micrpohone said that our flight was belated. So we only have one option, to wait.
And then started to pass one, two, three, four, till we gat up to twelve hours, we wait twelve hours in the airport.
Whit out eating because the food was so expensive.
Finaly our flight arrive, and we land on the DF at 1:30 am of the next day.
Hernandez Acosta Luis Hilario: 402 B
I remember that journey. It was in the month of July, my fanily and I wento on holidays to Huatulco, Oaxaca. Everything was going ok, but the day in that we have to return to the DF was when the nightmare starts.
We arrive at airport, the day was rainy, our flight was at twelve of clock, so we arrive on time.
When was time to go, a voice in a micrpohone said that our flight was belated. So we only have one option, to wait.
And then started to pass one, two, three, four, till we gat up to twelve hours, we wait twelve hours in the airport.
Whit out eating because the food was so expensive.
Finaly our flight arrive, and we land on the DF at 1:30 am of the next day.
Palacios Brambila Miguel 402-B
When i was 9 years, I went to chiapas with my family. My father driving a car in the highway, when start to rain very strong, my dad cant see anything, he stop the car and hope but the rain not stop ,me and my brother was very boring,next to hope for 5 hours the rain is stop,when the rain are finish my father can continue whit chiapas ,this day we arrived to my uncle`s house in chiapas at 2 am.
Origel Ruiz Damian
Three years ago, I traveled to Cuernavaca with my family.
That journey was fine, we were very happy in the pool, but the nightmare started at night.
We were sleeping deeply, until a car alarm woke us.
Thinking it was our car, I went to see what happened.
Outside of the house, all was dark.
Our car was fine. It was an other car alarm.
In the return at the house, I was surprised when I looked down, because it was full of bugs.
There was wasps, ants, beetles, dragonflies and other bugs.
It was horrible, but in the morning the bugs was ate by the birds.
In all probability it was a real nightmare journey.
Origel Ruiz Damian
Three years ago, I traveled to Cuernavaca with my family.
That journey was fine, we were very happy in the pool, but the nightmare started at night.
We were sleeping deeply, until a car alarm woke us.
Thinking it was our car, I went to see what happened.
Outside of the house, all was dark.
Our car was fine. It was an other car alarm.
In the return at the house, I was surprised when I looked down, because it was full of bugs.
There was wasps, ants, beetles, dragonflies and other bugs.
It was horrible, but in the morning the bugs was ate by the birds.
In all probability it was a real nightmare journey.
Origel Ruiz Damian
Three years ago, I traveled to Cuernavaca with my family.
That journey was fine, we were very happy in the pool, but the nightmare started at night.
We were sleeping deeply, until a car alarm woke us.
Thinking it was our car, I went to see what happened.
Outside of the house, all was dark.
Our car was fine. It was an other car alarm.
In the return at the house, I was surprised when I looked down, because it was full of bugs.
There was wasps, ants, beetles, dragonflies and other bugs.
It was horrible, but in the morning the bugs was ate by the birds.
In all probability it was a real nightmare journey.
Navarro Chàvez Ronaldo Javier 408-B
Three years ago I was in a weird dream because I was in a little town where all the houses were black and gray,I was walking to a light with my friend Sergio for no reason and we were very scared.
In the light there was a monster with eyes in his body He was terrible! We screamed and ran very fast then my friend Sergio fainted and I was alone,I found a sword and I went to kill the monster and I achieved it, then I woke up,it was a terrible Nightmare journey! But in the end all was ok!
Rivero Lòpez Eduardo Isaac 513-B
It was in my last vacations like in July of this year. I returned to Mexico for Leon, Guanajuato.
Because my brother Alberto has there and we wanted a few vacations days.I was with my mother in the bus and my brother Ruben was the driver in the car.
We arrive at the bus terminal, our bus was at twelve one o’clock , so we would come early,but when was time to go, we were told that the bus was going to leave a little late and had to wait .
Finally our bus arrive and and we got to Leon late as 7 am of the next day, but all nice.
Lòpez Martìnez Natlleli 508-B
When I was only about 8 years old, I lived a really nightmare journey. I went to visit the "Gigantes de Tula" and all the trip was really nice, I went with my mother and my father, but the problem started when we where coming back to home. My father was driving very calm at the road, and it wasn't really late but it was starting to get dark, and suddenly the car that was driving just in front of us didn't saw a buffer stop it started twisting and finally crashed us and we swage to a sign at the road. We had to call the assurance, then we had to get a way to come back to home, it was very terrible for me because I was little and I was half-asleep. We finally got home more or less at 4 am.
González Pérez Cecilia 408-B
My nightmare journey
It happened five years ago, we were going to a little beach called “El Raudal” in the Gulf of Mexico. I was traveling by car, with my parents, and we just want to be at the beach, have fun and swim a little.
Everything went just fine at the road, until we went right into a traffic jam. A big red lorry was blocking the road, and there were a car crash behind us, blocking our way back home, so we can’t just turn back. People said it will be a matter of minutes, but the lorry was broken and the driver was not in sight.
We were there for about two hours, in a big car park on the road, until help came and the lorry was put aside. Then we decided to go back home, because we felt very tired and just wanted to rest a while.
GARCIA GARCIA KAROL ARIADNA 508-A
last year ago, my family and I traveled to cancun then we were on the plane, I was talking with my brother when the plane started to shake, everybody started to scream, the children was crying, hugged my brother because
I was afraid, the air hostess told "everybody quiet, nothing happens here" but many people felt bad. then the pilot told everything is normal continue with the trip.
it was horrible.
when we arrived and all was calm got a refund.
then my family and I went to hotel
this day I thought I would die hahaha!
Gaminio Reyes María Fernanda 508A
It was on the second week of spring break, my family, some friends and I were returning from a tour through the north side of Chiapas. We went for holiday and we were planning to stay the whole week, but unfortunately nothing went the way that it was meant to.
It was late at night and we all were almost asleep, even though we were on a van and super close to each other, nothing comfortable. But suddenly a native guy approached us from nowhere and very worried started to yell us that we couldn't press forward, that we should turn around because ahead on the road, a group of guys, that supposedly were followers of General Marcos, a leader of a movement that was happening in that time on the south of Mexico were bumping into the cars and mugging them. We obviously got terrified and changed our road, but the only way to return was taking a secondary federal road so it took us like almost 5 hours more than what we expected to get back.
At the end everything went right, despite of have returned until dawn, and we were very glad that that guy appeared to notify us and we had just an affright.
Gaminio Reyes Maria Fernanda 508A.
Martinez Luna Julia Elizabeth
Grupo 408 Seccion B
It was on October 6, 2013. My boyfriend's family and I went to Six Flags. We went because was the birthday of my boyfriend. At the beginning of the trip everything was fine, but then I fell asleep and when I woke up I saw that they had forgotten me and that was very sad. And then he remembered that he was missing something, their jackets. So when I looked back and said it was my fault. After my boyfriend's brother threw up on me and was really unpleasant. Finally we hit with a bus, and again, they said that was my fault. And I return to my home late and full of vomit, and also without eating.
Martínez Luna Julia Elizabeth
Grupo 408 Sección B
It was on October 6, 2013. My boyfriend's family and I went to Six Flags. We went because was the birthday of my boyfriend. At the beginning of the trip everything was fine, but then I fell asleep and when I woke up I saw that they had forgotten me and that was very sad. And then he remembered that he was missing something, their jackets. So when I looked back and said it was my fault. After my boyfriend's brother threw up on me and was really unpleasant. Finally we hit with a bus, and again, they said that was my fault. And I return to my home late and full of vomit, and also without eating.
Martínez Luna Julia Elizabeth
Grupo 408 Sección B
It was on October 6, 2013. My boyfriend's family and I went to Six Flags. We went because was the birthday of my boyfriend. At the beginning of the trip everything was fine, but then I fell asleep and when I woke up I saw that they had forgotten me and that was very sad. And then he remembered that he was missing something, their jackets. So when I looked back and said it was my fault. After my boyfriend's brother threw up on me and was really unpleasant. Finally we hit with a bus, and again, they said that was my fault. And I return to my home late and full of vomit, and also without eating.
Romero Lopez Brandon Daniel 402-B
I don´t remember exactly the day of my nightmare journey, my family and I went to Cuernavaca, because we were in a summer vacations.
my dad was driving, the road was very foggy, so we did not see very well, when suddenly the car stopped and had to go down to see what was happened, my sister was very scared, my mom said that nothing would to pass, after 1 or 2 hours the car returned to work and most strange is that we never knew because the car stopped
Finally we arrived in Cuernavaca and I was very happy because my nightmare journey ended.
Diana Paula Calderon Ornelas 508A
A few weeks ago, my friends and I were on our way to surprise birthday party really far from our houses in the north of the city. One of my friends took us in his car and everything was alright but in the middle of the main street the wheel was pinched with a piece of glass from a broken bottle. The girls were so scared, including me. Our friend tried to fix it but at the end a really nice man helped us and they changed the wheel. It took like two or three hours because no one stopped to help us and any of us knew how to do it, but at the end we arrived to the party. We were really late and missed the surprise, but at the end it was a good night.
Karla Villalpando Diaz 402-B
It was October of 2011, my family and I were in Puerto Vallarta , we was in vacation because of my brother's birthday , we decided to go to the port to take a cruise ,we took "the imperial" I don't remember exactly , It was going ok we swam in a place where there was a lot of dolphins , and we stopped in a island , there we did many activities , but the sun was very intense and the ship wasn't there we spend like 5 hours there ,our skin were burned too much and that night we had a important dinner , we didn't go to the dinner because the skin was burning , that was the worst vacation I had ever had, but Cancun is cool.
Fuentes Chávez Ulises Abraham 402-B
When I was nine years old, I went with my parents to Six Flags Mexico because we wanted to have fun.
We had a good day and we really enjoyed the park, the problem was that when we returned to the car, my father didn't find the car's keys! We thought that he had lost them inside of the park, so we didn't look for them because the park was enormous. I was really worried.
Finally, my father called my brother and he explained him everything. Fortunately, we had a duplicate of the keys in our house, so my brother brought us the duplicate and in the end, we opened the car and returned to our house.
It was July of 2011,I went to Guerrero with my family to spend the hollidays as every year. Every thing was alright until...
My mom shout where is Alfredo(my Little brother), we can't found him.
My uncles said that he wasn't in the pool mean while we were looking for him out of the pool but we can't found him.
Like a half of an hour later the life guard arrived with my brother he told us that we had to be more careful because Alfredo almost felt to the wáter that luckily he was near to helped him. All my family said thanks to the life guard, since that day we take care of my brother better.
RODRIGUEZ GOMES EDGAR JESUS 513B
Castañeda Covarrubias Anayeli 508-A
My best friend manuel and I, went to the zocalo on December 20th 2012, because I wanted learn in the ice skate. We saw each other at the subway station: "Ermita" at 7 pm. We traveled until the station "Zocalo". We went to the ice rink and everything was just fine until we returned. The clock marked at 11:25 when we went the "Ermita". Manuel insisted on accompanying me to the station "Tlahuac". In Tlahuac, the clock marked at 11:55 and he had to change subway line!
At the end he had to walked for two hours to get his home!
We will never see again so late.
Cortes Bermejo Ivan Rodrigo Grupo:402B
A nightmare journey I remember was on December of 2011, my all family and I went to Africam Safari because we wanted to visited that zoo. We went in my grandpa´s van.
We passed great the day, but when we have been returning to Mexico, first I remember a rush hour in the sun, we were angry and desesperate. But that wasn't the worst thing, then one hour later we were on the highway, it started to rain and it was so cold, my little cousins was cold, all the freeze air and the rain was entring inside the van. We don´t have any sweter or coats. My uncle´s don´t know how to stop it.
Finally, they put a tarp to stop the rain, it calmed a little bit the trip.When we arrived to my granparent's house, it stop to rain, that made us, upset.
Caballero Rodríguez Diana Karina
508
Nightmare journey.
In 2007, when I was 10 years old, my family and I every year plan a trip to Uruapan Michoacán, in summer vacations to visit my uncle Diego. The trip of 2 weeks had ended and we made the trip on returning to the Mexico City.
In the road on returning to my city, there was a stagnation, we were going about 40 minute without moving when to my cousin and I fallen in sleep. Suddenly, a strange noise woke me up, followed by a tremendous jolt of the van, roll over rapidly to my right to see what was causing it: a bus of tourist line WAS SHOCKING US, undoing completely the right side of the van and crawling towards the shore of the bridge of the road.
After 7 hours, the insurance ones they took all to us to the hospital to have a checkup, gave us another van to return to the city and we went for something to dinner at 1 a.m.
Arrieta García Karla Samantha 508-A
It was six years ago, to be exact, on December 26, 2007. Our destination was Los Angeles California, I was accompanied by my parents and the purpose of the trip was to celebrate my birthday.
The trip was very tired, and I remember there was turbulence mid-flight that gave me a sharp pain in the ears and couldn't control airstewardess. At the end of the trip, we explained that the pilot had to raise the plane more than expected because of so much fog. Currently I think each plane traveling the same thing happen.
I was very annoyed and just wanted off the plane, and fortunately didn't pass over and come right to our destination.
It was on September the 15th, the day of my birthday. My dad and I were going to a party that he had organised me at my uncle's house.
We were about to arrive when it all went wrong... We were in a huge traffic jam and suddenly my dad crashed, as well as another five cars, so we had to stop and wait for the insurance-agent to arrive. He lasted about two hours, and, when he finally got to where we were, he only made my dad to sign some papers and he told us that we could go on, fortunately for my father, the car wasn't damaged at all, so we continued in our way. At the end we got to my uncle's house five hours late, but the party went in and I have lots of fun after that unfortunate trip.
Ramirez Gomez Sandra Angelica 408-B :)
Well, three years ago my dad had the amazing idea to go on a journey to Sinaloa, by car, which takes more or less 12 hours, (i dont know why he wanted to drive for 12 hours). In the car we were my sister, my mom, my dad and I, we only wanted to have a good journey.
My dad didn't know what he was he doing,because we had never been on the car, but NO! my dad thought that he could do it, but he was wrong.
We got lost like for 4 hours,
we was only driving in circles, And we just went through the same place, and came back, and came back to the same place like a thousand times.
At the end we stay in a hotel in michoacan, because we was tired, and we was starving.
My dad still thinks that he could have done it. BUT NO!
Rios Zamora Monserrat 513B
A few weeks ago, I can not remember the exact day.
I was with my little brother, my mom and my dog in the park, everything was going great, we decided to let go for a moment to our dog, "Lucky", it was very quiet and tired, but suddenly a squirrel step and he was behind her, ran quickly and disappeared into the bushes, we don't found him, we did not know what to do, we were very sad and worried, we hollered his name but he did not return.
After a while a man came out with "Lucky" from the bushes, told us that "Lucky" was very scared, but when he saw us was happy.
At the end we thanked the man for his good deed and we came home
It was a good day, but I was so scared.
Del Valle Navarrete Mireya Group: 508-A
The journey begins December 31, 2011, I went to Tuxpan Veracrúz with my parents and my brothers decided to go there to celebrate new year, was an important trip because my father did not have time to travel.
It was our first trip to Veracruz, so we did not know the route of arrival, we did not know how to get on the highway and we use a road full of trucks, the trouble was that the trip took 10 hours and could not get off to take a break because it was dangerous. What happened is that we had to ask several times to get information.
Finally arrived, and it was a great new year with my loved ones.
Olmos García Fernanda
513
My nightmare journey was 3 months ago was on my vacations I went to Querétaro with my mom, my dad and my cousin. We only went for vacations.
When we put the things in the car for went to Querétaro my father forgot my suitcase, in my suitcase was my clothes, shoes and my personal things, but the worst was I never revised it, then when we arrived to Queretaro my suitcase wasn't in the car. It was horrible now I didn't have nothing.
But finally it wasn't very bad because my mom bought me new clothes and shoes. And I enjoyed very much all my vacations with my family.
Gómez Juárez Alinne 508A
It was July of this year, My family and I went to Acapulco to celebrate my birthday.
It happened one day after my birthday in the pool at the hotel where we were in Acapulco. My parents given me a new cell phone and decided to use it to take pictures of the hotel and the pool to upload them to my Twitter. Accidentally, when I was taking a picture, I DROPPED MY PHONE IN THE POOL! I was worried, so I dove into the pool to pick out my cell phone. When I got out of the pool with my phone, I dried with a towel but now it doesn't turn on. My parents punished me and didn't let me talk for the rest of the vacation.
Finally, when I returned to Mexico, I ordered to fix my phone and it started to work.
I really hate this vacations :(
Fernández Rojas Denise Yeazul
508A
The most terrible journey in my life was when I went to Cancun. First my family and I arrived to the hotel and instantly say on the news that the weather will be horrible in those days, never we get to the beach. Trying to get away from the terrible weather rent a car, which was decomposed.
My sister and mother was sick and could not go anywhere.
When he finally came back to the city, the plane sufferen an injury and we stayed one more day in Cancun. The worst thing is that we could not move out of the airport waiting for the plane.
It is the mos terrible journey of my life
When I was 6 years old, my family organized a trip to Puerto Vallarta, was summer and all adults asked for vacation this time and my uncle offered his van so we could all go together.
We were on the road, it was like 11 o'clock in the morning and the truck began to take lots of smoke from the chest. We stopped in the road and looked for a well to water. Nothing of what you tried worked. We were all desperate and crane took hours to arrive.
After many hours, became crane which had called and took us to the nearest hotel.
Morán Ortíz Frida Sofía
402B
Nightmare journey
The one I remember the best, was seven years ago, I was just eight or so. I was with my mom, and my aunt, I can’t forget what happened but I don’t remember where were we going, It might had been from CU to the Zócalo, or something such as that, because it was our daily route.
Everything was fine, until we got downtown, and a policeman deviated us, because of a manifestation, we thought it would be fast, and it couldn't take long, but it wasn't like that. It took us about three hours to get out of that terrible traffic jam, and we weren’t happy.
Finally, we arrived home, even though it was very stressing, there were not reason to get angry, there was nothing we could do at all, so we decided that forgetting was the best.
Montiel Hernández Berenice 513
In August of 2012 I was in Prepa 6 with my friend Lorena and we had to delivered documents to the office in this place.
All my class mates was filling one document and I started ti write in mine. But a secretery told us we didn't have to write in this document so I realised I was writing whith pen and I didn't have other paper similar that. I was waiting my turn so I decided to call my uncle and ask him to bring me a document, because he lives near this place and I didn't have to leave. Fortunately, my uncle came fast; but after he was going out I discovered I'd forgotten others documents and I had to leave the school to do to internet coffe and to print ones.
I returned fast enought and I waited for a long time yet. Finally the secretary asked us to return the next day because she'd finished her time and I was very angry.
Montiel Hernández Berenice 513
In August of 2012 I was in Prepa 6 with my friend Lorena and we had to delivered documents to oficces in this place.
All my classemates were filling their document and I started to write in mine. Sudenly, a secretary told us we didn´t must to write in it and I realise I was writing by pen. I was waiting my turn so I decided to call my aunt and I asked him to bring me one, because he lives near this place and I didn't have to move for here. Fortunately, he came fast but after he´d left I discovered I´d forgotten others documents so I had to go to internet cafe to prited these.
Then, I returned fast anought and I waited some time yet. Unfortunately, the secretary ask us we return the next day and I went out felling me wrong.
It was many yeras ago. It was a beautiful day and my family and I were in Acapulco celebrating the Independence day.
We were all happy and a Little bit exhausted for all the things we had done the previous days. Until here the holidays were the best in my life, but it arrived the day that we had to return. Since the first moment the day started bad with a terrible weather, then we were in the road and our car broke down. Afortunately we could arrive to a Little town, there some peolple help us fixing the car. But we had to stay one night there cause the rain didnt le tus go. The next day we colud return without problems with the car but it was Monday and we couldn’t arrive to school. For my cousins and me was great but for my father no, that day he was meeting a important person at work.
Paulina Estefania Acevedo Huerta 511
It was many yeras ago. It was a beautiful day and my family and I were in Acapulco celebrating the Independence day.
We were all happy and a Little bit exhausted for all the things we had done the previous days. Until here the holidays were the best in my life, but it arrived the day that we had to return. Since the first moment the day started bad with a terrible weather, then we were in the road and our car broke down. Afortunately we could arrive to a Little town, there some peolple help us fixing the car. But we had to stay one night there cause the rain didnt le tus go. The next day we colud return without problems with the car but it was Monday and we couldn’t arrive to school. For my cousins and me was great but for my father no, that day he was meeting a important person at work.
Paulina Estefania Acevedo Huerta 511
Capilla Núñez Claudia Alejandra 508 A
It was a Friday about April of this year , I’m went to the school with my aunt. I left my house about 6:35, all was exactly like the others days, but when we were in the first bridge in our way this take us 30 minutes!!! (and usually this part of the way take us 5 minutes ), after this, in “Calzada de Tlalpan” we spend A HOUR!!! I was despairing, because we went in the halfway, fortunately after that terrible part of the way the other part was more clear. But sadness I was late to Geography :’(.
Marín Pardo Tania Vanessa 511-A
It was two years ago, in September. I was walked to my house with my mom, my brother and my cousin. It was starting to rain and we had celebrating the Independence Day and we went to eat a pozole, but my cousin want a candy, then, she and my brother stays get back and me and my mom being advanced. For a minutes, we don't know where was my brother and my cousin and the rayn began to grow up. My mom and me decided to go to the house and speak to my brother on telephone. When my mom open the dor of the house, we found my cousin and my brother inside. In the end, we discovered they walked a shortcut to came to the house.
De la Cruz Rico Emanuel 511
My nightmare journey was on June 2005 when I was with my mom and my two sisters in Cuba. We went to Cuba because my mom always wanted to go there.
We were fine until we want to come back to Mexico. We arrived at the airport a few minutes late. When we were trying to board the plane we were retained in the customs because they didn’t believe that my mom was she because she tanned the skin due to the weather in Cuba. We spend a few hours trying to convince them that we weren’t illegal.
We had a lot of troubles but in the end we could leave Cuba in the plane. After left the customs we had a nice flight and we enjoyed the travel.
I went to Puebla the last summer. My trip was horrible because the bus was smaller and hotter, but I can't survive. When I arrive I've stayed with my cousin, it was incredible but at the same time horrible. First we went to eat cemitas in the market, it was delicious and bigger, then we visited at his friends and one of them had a party, so everybody decided to go.
The party was incredible, it was in the fresh air with lights and music,but when we have to return we had a problem because the house was in a forest, and it was very late, but the worst was that we can’t find transport, but my cousin tell me that he met a friend who can help us, just we have to walk 10 minutes. he was wrong, of course, we walked for a long time and never found the house.We had problems with mosquitos and fly, and we was hungry. After a few hours we could return home because we found the correct way and we arrived at 5am. Thankfully my uncles already had fallen asleep. The next days everything was better we went to a park to run. After we walked and arrived to the market, we ate cemitas again,really you can't go to Puebla and don't eat cemitas. In the afternoon we had a family dinner.Finally I ate my last cemita, because my parents arrived and pick me.
I forgot put my group teacher, it's 511A. atte. brenda briz
Ramos Herrera Daniel 408/B
It was a Friday, July of 2010, it was a rainy day (I think it was a STORM) in the night, I was going in the car with my mother and my brother, I was 11 years old, we were going to visit my grandmother, who lives in Hidalgo, we were in the highway, there was a lot of traffic and the highway was under repair, my car fall down into a drain, my mother was desperate because all the cars was behind us, we were there like 2 hours, when we have no hope, a crane appears and help us to get out of there, we arrive to Hidalgo at 11 o'clock, my mom was happy that we arrived there, my grandmother was very scared because we didn’t arrive to her house. When we were “safe” in her house, we were hungry and sleepy. At the end we all eat and sleep.
Lizeth Mireya Mondragón Cervantes 513 B
That journey was a many years ago, approximately about eight years. I travelled to the beach, to Acapulco with all my family, my parents, my grandparents, my uncles and my cousins. We travelled because it was the April vacations.
We travelled by car, because it was more convenient for us, but when we came back, in the middle of the road, one of the wheels of the car broke down. We didn’t have another wheel in the car, so we have to wait someone who had another wheel for help us. While we were waiting we talked, sang and played but It was awful because it was boiling, we were hungry and we didn’t have more food and water.
In the end, someone stopped with us, gave us a wheel and helped us. Then, we went back to the car and came back to home.
María Fernanda Vega Zamora
513
It happened two years ago, my family decided it would be a great idea to travel to Guadalajara BY CAR! It was the longest journey I have ever take, the car, after some hours, was very uncomfortable and it was really sunny. We stopped for a while in Michoacan but it was a really hot summer afternoon there and all the restaurants where full so we just stay a bit in the centre of the city. Everybody was moody, hungry and hot, all we wanted was to get to the hotel and sleep for a long, long time. IT WAS HORRIBLE!
Mani Yañez Mauricio 513
One day when I was on 5th grade we went to San Antonio Texas from Monterrey Nuevo Leon, I went with all my family; Mauricio my dad, Elsa my mom, Antonio my brother and me, we want some cloths and visit Sea World which is actualy great.
First on the road we were empty on gas and it was around 8 o clock so i get really scared, ones we got to San Antonio it was around 2 am and we didnt had an hotel so we search it for around an hour we started thinking we didnt find an hotel and sleep on the car.
In the end my dad return with the gas and with a cop so, and we also find an hotel wich actually was really creepy. So thats my story
Franco Moreno Sergio Edgar 511A
Nightmare journey
On my last Christmas Vacation, I visited Cozumel Island with my family; everything was being incredible, and I were having a lot of fun because the place was amazing and beautiful.
We took a plane to visit Isla Mujeres, another island near there, Isla Mujeres was so pretty, so we decided to rent a golf cart and make a journey around the island, I enjoyed it because my dad borrowed me the car, we stopped on a beach at the other side of the island and we park the car in a “safe place”, then we sat to rest and my brother went to swim on the beach. Suddenly my parents and I turned around and we saw the golf car falling down at full speed through the hill we parked it to the sea, we ran as fast as we could to the car, my father and I tried to stop the car because it was rented, we did it but my father broke his leg, He didn’t resist the pain so I took the car and drive it to take my dad to the nearest hospital!
Ollin Janetzy Solís Alvarado 513
no my last summer vacations I visited Nuevo Laredo Texas with my mom , we went there because my father work in a school in Texas , my father dosen't had vacations so my mom and I decide to visited him. The flight was horrible, we almost died , because there was a lot of turbulence by a storm , but The plane is well stabilized and reached our destination, my dad was really worriied , he didn't know if we were right or wrong.
That was our horrible adventure , but eventually we had fun , we met many people , we bought a lot of things and the most important we lived with my dad.
Ollin Janetzy Solís Alvarado 513
no my last summer vacations I visited Nuevo Laredo Texas with my mom , we went there because my father work in a school in Texas , my father dosen't had vacations so my mom and I decide to visited him. The flight was horrible, we almost died , because there was a lot of turbulence by a storm , but The plane is well stabilized and reached our destination, my dad was really worriied , he didn't know if we were right or wrong.
That was our horrible adventure , but eventually we had fun , we met many people , we bought a lot of things and the most important we lived with my dad.
Thanks guys for your participation!! See you tomorrow.
Frida Baños Hoffmann 508 - A
It was October 6th of 2013, the family of my boyfriend, my boyfriend and i went to cocoyoc,i went because they invited me, the first reason was because it was the 15th birthday of my boyfriend's cousin. The day was perfect, my boyfriend and me went to the town in his car, we were singing in the road and having a lot of fun, we drank beer and after that a "raspado", in second place we went to a small lake with ducks, his cousins and my boyfriend played volleyball and football, after that we swam a lot and we ate meat. Anything was wrong, just a moment when my boyfriend and me were lost in the town and the horrible traffic in the road Cuernava - D.F. we made 2 hours, but at the end of the day everything was perfect.
It was at 2009 when my mom decided to travel to NY for the last month of the year and the first one of the new one. First I traveled by car to Monterrey and there was a lot of people at the highway, we decided to enter the federal roadway and that was the worst decition ever, the federal roadway was full of people because it was blocked, the weather was very cold and we all were frustrated because of the horrible sunrise.My family journey was very long and when we arrived at Monterrey, a car wheel bumped, so we needed to stay for more time there. At the end we could finish our journey and we had a good time at NY. But we were late 2 days.
511 Guerrero Diaz de León Eduardo
This vacation was the worst of all I ever have because I needed to work a lot from 7 am to 6 pm and that was very exhausting because when I wanted to do something, I couldn't because of my job. If I wanted to go to six flags... I couldn't because I needed to go to work. At morning, when I woke up, I needed to be fast and take my daily shower, then have my breakfast and after that travel to my job. It was really far from my house. It was at Cuernavaca, so I decided to live for a while there. I rented house at the Cuernavaca's centre. I spent my vacations there and it was sad because I couldn't have fun as o could if I weren't working there. At the end I returned to my house with money.
Adrian Díaz Xelhuantzi. 511A
the worst journey I had was last year when I went to Acapulco with my family because my cousin was competing on a swimming career.
The problem starts when the car stopped because there wasn't gasoline so my father went walking to the gas station for a little.
we were waiting in the car and the sun was burning really hard without water and without food, my father returns five hours later and we couldn't arrive on time for being with my cousin.
When I was younger I went to Acapulco in saint weekend with my family
the traffic was horrible it toke to us like 2 hours just to get out of the city then we notice that there was just a pay farther then at the autopist was more fluid
I got asleep to make the time go faster but was a slow and boring journey
Alonzo Gomez Mauricio
Grupo 511
Sanchez Romero Brandon Alexis 408-B
In summer vacations in june of 2003 my family (my mother, my father, and muy brother) and I went to Ixtapan de la Sal for the vacations we have been there 3 days.
in the beginning It was very good and fun in the water parkbut it was the NIGHTMARE JOURNEY because everyone of muy family didnt get sun block and in the return all of muy family were we burned and it was so painful and longer because we have the itching and pain for a week¡¡
Romero Mejia Searley Naomi 402 B
The trip was two years ago in November 3rd and my parents, my sisters and I were returning to Mexico City from Puebla, 1 day before removed me a molar and when we are in the middle of the way began to rain, the molar began to hurt me, and the mist didn’t let us see well, there was a lot of traffic and every time the molar hurts me more, 1 hour later the pain was horrible and I didn’t take a medicine because we don’t have, when only left one hour to arrive the car stops and we don’t know why, we call for someone to fix the car and in 2 hours we arrive home
Rios Zamora Monserrat 513
A month ago, my family and I were returning home after a party, but we did not know how to get home, we were lost.
It was late at night, we passed a fairly dark street, suddenly a motorcycle step closer to us, the bike stopped and left two people ,they were not seen very nice, they wanted to start hitting the car. I thought they were going to steal or they wanted to do something worse.
Luckily, my father was able to accelerate the car and went quickly from there.
After the help of the internet we could go home.
Ana Fernanda Roldán Macías 513B
A few years ago, my family and I were going to the beach, because we wanted to take a breath from work and school.
My dad was driving through the highway at night, and suddenly, a man in a bicycle appeared in front of us, my dad didn't wanted to hit him, so he turned aside the way, causing an accident where we fell from a crag. After that, all of us had some broken bones and wounds in all our bodies, our car was destroyed and we were really scared.
Luckily, a really nice woman and her husband helped us get out of the car, they also called the emergency line, so an ambulance came and took us to the closest hospital.
Ramírez Peniche María Fernanda 513B
On November 8 of this year, my friends and I had planned to go to the house of our friend Lorna, who lived in San Miguel Ajusco, we went to make a project to your home, First we decided to go to the Dabo stationery to buy the materials to work on the project, then we went with his brother who took us in his car, we had no idea where was his home but went to Lorna's house.
From school to her house, took us two hours. When we got Lorna's home, his mom prepared the food and we ate, then we went to work and we finished the job, it was very nice. It was very late and we had to leave, the mother of our friend Ana would take us to the Chabacano subway but she doesn't led us because she could not reach the house of Lorna, Lorna's mother spoke to many people to take us to the Chabacano subway but they weren't in their houses.
We decided to go by taxi but were forbidden for us because it was late and it was dark and we were afraid because the way was in the middle of a uninhabited village but eventually all arrived safe and alive to our destination.
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